Friday, February 24, 2023

God said No: A poem by Claudia Minden Weisz

 

The Original:

approx. 1978 by Claudia Minden Weisz

I asked God to take away my pride.

God said, “No.  It is not for me to take away, but for you to give up.”

I asked God to make my handicapped child whole.

God said, “No.  Her spirit is whole.  Her body is only temporary.”

I asked God to grant me patience.

God said, “No. Patience is a byproduct of tribulations; it is not granted, it is earned.

I asked God to give me happiness.

God said, “No. I give you blessings. Happiness is up to you.”

I asked God to spare me pain.

God said, “No. Suffering draws you apart from worldly cares and brings you  closer to me.”

I asked God to make my spirit grow.

God said, “No. You must grow on your own, but I will prune you to make you fruitful.”

I asked for all things that I might enjoy life.

God said, “No. I will give you life so that you may enjoy all things.”

I ask God to help me LOVE others, as much as he loves me.

God said... “Ahhhh, finally you have the idea.”

GENESIS 9:12-15


I, like everyone else, altered it a little to fit my life at the time, on or about April 2008:

 With that in mind, I wrote:

  

I asked God to take away my pride.

God said, “No.  It is not for me to take away, but for you to give up.”

I asked God to make my body healthy.

God said, “No.  Your spirit is whole.  Your body is only temporary.”

I asked God to grant me patience.

God said, “No. Patience is a byproduct of tribulations; it is not granted, it is earned.

I asked God to give me happiness.

God said, “No. I give you blessings. Happiness is up to you.”

I asked God to spare me pain.

God said, “No. You must grow on your own.”

I asked God to make my spirit grow.

God said, “No. You must grow on your own, but I will prune you to make you fruitful.”

I asked for all things that I might enjoy life.

God said, “No. I will give you life so that you may enjoy all things.”

I asked God to help me LOVE others, as much as he loves me.

God said... “Ah, finally you have the idea.”




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